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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in over-weight people in the society? How can this problem be solved?

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These days, we have been looking at those who are at severe health problems because of obesity.obesity causes mainly because of two reasons
such
 as eating more junk
food
 and sitting in the same place for several hours.which we can resolve by following a proper diet and regular exercise. Earlier days,
people
 used to eat more home
food
 either because
of
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the
food
 industry was not grown up as now or they were not interested in it.
However
, Nowadays, it has increased with technology so rapidly,
,
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eventually
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 consumers have been increased. due to chemicals or oils which they use while preparing
food
 making the
people
 fat, which put their health at risk.
In addition
,
people
 are spending to sit and work in their companies for a long time.For
a
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instance, a software employee should work at least 9 hours a day by sitting on the chair
as a result
 most of them are falling sick.
therefore
, these are two main reasons to get obese. on
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 side, In ,society many
people
 are following a proper diet and doing daily exercise to improve their immunity level and reduce overweight.
for example
, as per the article published by times
now
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 India said "it is increased to 58
percentage
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 when compared with previous ten years" those who are being cautious about health and
Governaments
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Governments
also
 taking
responsibilites
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responsibility
responsibilities
 to do res. In conclusion, eating more fast
food
 and sitting more time on the chair are two impacts of obesity and we could solve
this
 by eating
food
 at regular times and doing yoga,going to the gym etc.
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