some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world/ Others feel that those organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Human beings are social animals and they have to be interactive to live in harmony in

this

modern world. It is a debatable issue

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whether to extend humanitarian relief beyond the borders or to restrict those activities within a country. In the upcoming paragraphs, both sides

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be discussed in detail. On the one hand, borderless donations have their own merits.

Firstly

, continuous but controlled financial help would be available to the poor and impoverished

population

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all over the globe. To elaborate,

under-privileged

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individuals who reside mainly in developing and underdeveloped countries might not be able to receive financial assistance from the respective governments. In

such

a scenario, borderless humanitarian assistance would be a boon for those

people

.

Secondly

, that financial aid would be indirect. To explain,

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have no direct responsibility to find out the eligible individuals. Most of the time,

people

who want to be part of

beyond the border

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monetary relief might not have to meet the beneficiaries.

For example

,

according to

the United Nations, 7 billion underprivileged

people

all over the world have

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benefited from

such

global charity movements till 2001.

Nevertheless

, proponents of confined charity help have their own justifications. To commence with,

This

would be helpful to terminate corruption. To explain, there are a lot of intermediaries who obtain financial benefits by hindering the availability of money to eligible individuals.

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help would eliminate those wicked

people

and could support the poor and destitute directly.

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regional humanitarian help would be necessary for the

overall

well-being of a country. When eligible ones are selected through direct invigilation from every part of the country could improve the basic amenities of its citizens.

For example

, a survey conducted by a reputed newspaper shows that through one-to-one charity activities,for the past 5 years, the basic living standard has been enhanced in India.

To conclude

, in my opinion,both the borderless,

as well as

countrywide donation works, are advantageous.

However

, the merits of

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humanitarian help outweigh the latter

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.

Due to

the reason that

such

activities could reach a limitless population.