With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extend do you agree?

I believe that even though the
internet
has made communicating easy we still remain lonely and it is getting harder to befriend
people
.
Firstly
,
this
essay will look at why we cannot
trust
and befriend everybody online and
secondly
, I will explain how the
internet
has failed to connect
people
. The crux of any relationship is
trust
, and unfortunately trusting everybody online is naive to a fault. The anonymity afforded by the
internet
has made it all too easy for anybody to create a
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identity, one might argue that there are checks and balances but, these are far from being foolproof. Using image editing software a person with basic computer skills can forge almost any document. It is little wonder; our news feeds are peppered with numerous accounts of online frauds and identity theft. Almost
everyone
who has an email address will be familiar with the “Nigerian prince email”. I do not advocate that
everyone
online is committing fraud but we cannot blindly
trust
everyone
on the World Wide Web.
On the other hand
, it is presumptuous to assume that the
internet
has reached
everyone
. Many developing countries still struggle with necessities, let alone have an interrupted supply of electricity. Having
internet
access is considered a luxury.
Secondly
, the majority of
people
from
the
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rural areas are not computer literate and will be unable to use the
internet
even if they have access. It would be foolhardy to assume that “
everyone
” is connected to the
internet
as can be seen with the
people
living in
the
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rural India. In conclusion, owing to the lack of
trust
we remain sceptical of the
people
that we have met online these connections are mere acquaintances
not
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“friends”, to compound matters the access to the
internet
is not universal. I
this
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entirely disagree with the statement.
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