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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extend do you agree?

#development #communication #people #friends
I believe that even though the
internet
 has made communicating easy we still remain lonely and it is getting harder to befriend
people
.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will look at why we cannot
trust
 and befriend everybody online and
secondly
, I will explain how the
internet
 has failed to connect
people
. The crux of any relationship is
trust
, and unfortunately trusting everybody online is naive to a fault. The anonymity afforded by the
internet
 has made it all too easy for anybody to create a
fictious
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fictitious
 identity, one might argue that there are checks and balances but, these are far from being foolproof. Using image editing software a person with basic computer skills can forge almost any document. It is little wonder; our news feeds are peppered with numerous accounts of online frauds and identity theft. Almost
everyone
 who has an email address will be familiar with the “Nigerian prince email”. I do not advocate that
everyone
 online is committing fraud but we cannot blindly
trust
everyone
 on the World Wide Web.
On the other hand
, it is presumptuous to assume that the
internet
 has reached
everyone
. Many developing countries still struggle with necessities, let alone have an interrupted supply of electricity. Having
internet
 access is considered a luxury.
Secondly
, the majority of
people
 from
the
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rural areas are not computer literate and will be unable to use the
internet
 even if they have access. It would be foolhardy to assume that “
everyone
” is connected to the
internet
 as can be seen with the
people
 living in
the
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rural India. In conclusion, owing to the lack of
trust
 we remain sceptical of the
people
 that we have met online these connections are mere acquaintances
not
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 “friends”, to compound matters the access to the
internet
 is not universal. I
this
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entirely disagree with the statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical gaps
  • interact
  • social media platforms
  • messaging apps
  • revolutionized
  • physical distance
  • online communities
  • camaraderie
  • immediate surroundings
  • unparalleled opportunities
  • superficial relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • emotional warmth
  • tactile comfort
  • digital communication
  • digital divide
  • internet censorship
  • global connectivity
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