companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that should
oganaization
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issue games and social
resources
for
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region? Most of the companies should do many free activities for their local people
such
as welfare facilities and conducting the sports.
However
, I strongly agree with
this
statement and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, every company have the responsibility for
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the society in order to they should provide these
amenties
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amenities
.
Firstly
, when
a
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industry conduct
the
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any games competition
with in
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their
home
region while they get more benefits both the industry and the people.
Secondly
, corporate social
responsibity
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responsibility
is the most important factor of every establishment
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therefore
they should do any kind of games competition in order to they should contribute to the country why they are being used all country
resources
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therefore
they should provide physical activity.
For example
, in India
top most
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business people are
sponserd
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sponsored
IPL cricket match as well as they have
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IPL team
such
as Mumbai Indians team owner is Nita Ambani.
On the other hand
,
this
kind of firm should do to what social facilities
such
as free medical camp, arrange the welfare
resources
, road supply and help to the poor man, and so on.
Moreover
, these kinds of potential should give to the community folks because the firm is taken all
home
region
resources
compared to living man
such
as water, land.
Therefore
, they have a responsibility to do
to
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for particular area humans.
For example
, the top most communication enterprise JIO, they are organised every
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medical camp for rural residents as a
reslt
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result
, the rural residents have a chance to take
best
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medicine. To conclude, the enterprise has more capital compared to normal guy
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therefore
they should contribute to the society improvements
this
means they must spend money for
home
citizens.
Furthermore
, they should give all these
varities
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varieties
of
amenties
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amenities
irrefutably.
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