Some people think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Money

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nowadays for all kinds of age person whether young,old.

However

, a fair

amount

of people think that the ministry should help who senior citizen by capital-based while others believe that the

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elderly

people should

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after by themselves. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with,

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the senior citizens had contributed

for

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the country improvements in many ways when they are young. They were being paid taxes to the government

such

as income tax, service tax, and property duty when they are working.

Therefore

, now the government should return help to the

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elderly

people how financially

such

free medical care and every month provide some

amount

.

For example

, in Singapore cabinet is being given every month pension

money

who their nation retired man

as a result

their

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elderly

older

guy is lived

healthy

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and happy life.

Although

, the above sixty age person should take care of their needs and wants of themselves

this

means they should be

independantly

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independently

without any holding stick

such

as they must save some capital for their future days when they are getting sixty. For instances,

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western countries companies strictly should take some

amount

of their workers salary when they are young

as a result

their state folks are being lived

independenly

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independently

without any support even the family aid

also

when they get sixty. To conclude, the ruling party has the primary responsibility to do what cash aid who their

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older

elderly

human

nevertheless

these kinds of human should save cash when they are earners

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as a result

they can use their own

money

for their own expenses.

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, In my opinion about

this

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the ruling party should focus

to

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their pension person in order to they can live

healthier

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and happier life without any stress by

money

.

Therefore

, the administration should give every month pension

amount

.