These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is fact that both males and females take the responsibility
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for their babies. Recently, it becomes more usually to see fathers looking after children.
This
state can emerge for several reasons.
Firstly
, it can be reluctance that rises because of staying at home for a long time . To be more clear, sometimes pregnant
women
take maternity leave during pregnancy, they can
also
sustain it for two or three years.
However
, some of them are willing to go on their career after birth.
Moreover
, during
this
period, they need more moral support, especially
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their husbands.
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, if a woman is getting to have a baby, she will be more emotional and needy,
therefore
, her mate has to stand by her and
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show his love by taking care in these times.
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, since
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century
women
have been aware of their rights thanks to
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the feminism

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feminism
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movement.
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ideology supports that, both genders should be equal
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every
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such
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. Feminism
change
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the population's mind
to
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a more contemporary way. Already, people accept the equality between male and female as normal and significant.
That is
why
,
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partners take charge of
babycare
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together.
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, if the mother has
work
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, the man can take
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paternity leave to help his wife. It is great to see people's view is getting developed day by day in most countries, and it is considered ordinary that, fathers look after children while mothers are at
work
, but is it always positive? To my mind, as long as it doesn't take more time, it is a useful idea because men
,
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must understand their responsibilities to children like
women
, since if
this
period lasts too long, it will have a negative effect on both sides.
For example
, a woman will be less interested in her child and a man will not be able to spend time at
work
.
This
can undermine the moral values ​​of
the
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society. In conclusion, the moral needs of
women
and change of peoples' mind because of feminism are motives of some modern
behaviors
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such
as a man looking after a child while a woman is at
work
.
However
,
this
improvement can have a detrimental effect on the community in the long term.
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