These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is fact that both males and females take the responsibility
euqally
for their babies. Recently, it becomes more usually to see fathers looking after children. Correct your spelling
equally
This
state can emerge for several reasons.
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Firstly
, it can be reluctance that rises because of staying at home for a long time . To be more clear, sometimes pregnant Linking Words
women
take maternity leave during pregnancy, they can Use synonyms
also
sustain it for two or three years. Linking Words
However
, some of them are willing to go on their career after birth. Linking Words
Moreover
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this
period, they need more moral support, especially Linking Words
by
their husbands. Change preposition
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For example
, if a woman is getting to have a baby, she will be more emotional and needy, Linking Words
therefore
, her mate has to stand by her and Linking Words
to
show his love by taking care in these times. Fix the infinitive
apply
Secondly
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century Correct article usage
the last
women
have been aware of their rights thanks to Use synonyms
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the feminism
feminism
movement. Replace the word
feminist
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ideology supports that, both genders should be equal Linking Words
by
every Change preposition
in
aspects
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aspect
such
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economical
. Feminism Replace the word
economic
change
the population's mind Change the verb form
changes
to
a more contemporary way. Already, people accept the equality between male and female as normal and significant. Change preposition
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,
partners take charge of Remove the comma
apply
babycare
together. Correct your spelling
baby care
For instance
, if the mother has Linking Words
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work
, the man can take Change the verb form
worked
a
paternity leave to help his wife.
It is great to see people's view is getting developed day by day in most countries, and it is considered ordinary that, fathers look after children while mothers are at Remove the article
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work
, but is it always positive? To my mind, as long as it doesn't take more time, it is a useful idea because menUse synonyms
,
must understand their responsibilities to children like Remove the comma
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women
, since if Use synonyms
this
period lasts too long, it will have a negative effect on both sides. Linking Words
For example
, a woman will be less interested in her child and a man will not be able to spend time at Linking Words
work
. Use synonyms
This
can undermine the moral values of Linking Words
the
society.
In conclusion, the moral needs of Correct article usage
apply
women
and change of peoples' mind because of feminism are motives of some modern Use synonyms
behaviors
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behaviours
such
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work
. Use synonyms
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improvement can have a detrimental effect on the community in the long term.Linking Words
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