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Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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 business meeting is so popular these days. The main benefits of
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personal contact and geographical distance while the problem of
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 development is that it may reduce
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human face to face interactions and develop psychological issues. On the one hand, while conducting digital conferences, especially, during the time of
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 pandemic,
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, when companies have been communicating with both
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 employees and customers
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online,
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 can minimise the spread of the disease
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 a great extent and run the firm without having the fear of Covid-19,
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, employees may be infected and companies’ functioning may be tarnished.
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virtual meetings offer the presence of every significant
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, without
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travelling to the conference hall.
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, if flights are stopped or the
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 cannot travel due to some other reasons.
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 conferences in the business sector.
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 modern advancement can bring some drawbacks as well. The obvious one is
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 lack of personal contact as people hardly meet in
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. Since being a social animal, humans may find
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 situation extremely difficult. The outward expression of
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 to
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, depression, anxiety, and suicidal ideation and so on. During the time of e-conference, members may not able to understand others’ psychological aspect of life and provide timely support.
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 many repercussions, including, low productivity and poor revenue. In conclusion, conducting online conference meeting for
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business purpose has both positives and negatives. When reduced human interaction and mental health issues are
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 downsides, ensuring social distancing and minimising the geographical barriers are positives.
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