Nowadays, a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds nowadays in many fields

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especially

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the medical

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field.

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, Today the people are gotten many free data from the internet

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, the folks are gotten awareness

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any sickness

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means they can protect their health before attack any illness.

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, if a person affects any disease while they are able to check their

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the healing ratio might be reduced.

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deadly disease because

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they are

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protected

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the deadly

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their health as well as free counsel

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, some people get full details about all the ill health-related from the world wide web even they are not being a doctor. In ,

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, the human will obtain

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remedies

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solution

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they can cure a small ill health-oriented without going to see

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means only a minor issue not a big.

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most

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developed countries doctors are recorded video while they are being done

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surgery

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the human race

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not afraid to do

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surgery in order to they can live

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some drawbacks and negativity can not be ignored

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kind of situation will bring more benefit to the entire society

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they can get aware about all sickness

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they are able to stay away from that.

reanudeepan

May 8, 2021

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