You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participant liked about the hotel. Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am privileged to have the opportunity to choose your hotel for our corporation meeting. Not to mention,
such
a prestigious hotel hosting our attendants has enjoyed reputation due to its excellent service. The participants were fascinated well-equipped conference hall, where was comfortable and have a modern system connected to a high-speed internet setting. Hygiene and cleanliness of sections, hospitable and multilingual receptionist were all noticeable.
However
, I am afraid to write I cannot say any positive comments on authentic dishes. In fact, the served food was awful and all participants complained. Some ingredients were not cooked properly or even uncooked and so dissatisfaction with
this
issue has been sent to my office. I highly recommend surveying about
this
problem and if an amateur chef was responsible to, it would be better to change with an expert.
This
is because your hotel has a number of valuable customers who would treat
flawlessly
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. Thank you for your consideration and hope to see improvements
further
. Yours sincerely,
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