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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four year old, while in other they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do your agrees with either of these views?

#countries #children #education #four #year #school #seven #eight
Mostly in Asian
countries
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children
 start formal
education
 at four years old,
however
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 it starts only at seven or eight Western Countries. Both the ideas
,
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 have some advantages and disadvantages.
First
 of all starting formal
education
 at four years old gives a
lot
 of free
time
 to
parents
 which they can utilize in their work.
For example
 for formal
education
children
goes
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 to
school
 at least 5 days a week and when
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children
childrens
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children
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 are in
school
parents
 can focus on their official duties and responsibilities. If
parents
 are able to spend more
time
 on work
then
 they can have better job opportunities. Starting early formal
education
also
 helps
children
 to socialize and learn discipline.
Children
 learn to share things and ideas which makes them more social.
Further
 learning manners from teachers makes them more
discipline
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disciplined
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.
On the
contrary
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children
 have
lot
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 of mental pressure after attending
school
 which may make them dull
On the other
hand
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 starting formal
education
 late at seven or
sight
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eight
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 gives them enough
time
 to prepare mentally and physically. When they go to
school
 late,
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they
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the
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they
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 are well prepared
about
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 the challenges they may face in
school
. Until seven or eight years
children
 learns a
lot
 of things in
home
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the home
a home
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 or child care which makes them easy for formal
education
.
However
 sending
children
 late, costs a
lot
 of
parents
time
 .If
children
are send
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school
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 late,
then
parents
 might have to quit their jobs. In conclusion, starting a formal
education
 early can save
parents
time
 but may affect mental and physical health. On the other
beginning
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 formal
education
 later can make
children
 mentally and physically strong but it might cost the job of their
parents
.
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