In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In today's world, competition has grown so much that
people
are going abroad for their studies. It could have both positive and negative impact. In the recent period,
people
choose to
study
outside their
country
to get better exposure in terms of knowledge and lifestyle. There could be multiple reasons as well for a person to go outside their
country
to
study
. In the past,
people
tend to
study
till higher secondary and start working in the firm. Due to the education , a development it's very difficult to get
jobs
after higher secondary that why
people
opt for better education.
Moreover
, the competition has increased so much that they want to
study
in the best university to get better knowledge and
jobs
in the future.
Also
,
people
want to have global exposure of the
jobs
just not in their own
country
but
also
in the foreign. In spite of
this
, there are some disadvantages of
people
going out of the
country
to
study
.
For example
, if
people
who have extraordinary skills choose to go out of the
country
for
jobs
,
this
could lead to the less skilled worker in the
country
. Because of ,
this
the
country
won't develop rapidly,
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there are reasons
such
as reservation to certain caste in the field of
study
, due to which
people
tend to choose other countries for a
study
where there is no reservation on the basis of caste. In conclusion,
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would say there could any many advantages and disadvantages if
people
decide to go out of the
country
to research and to work.
Also
, in the ,past there aren't many opportunities as we have now,
therefore
,
people
select the best opportunity they have.
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