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QUESTIONS: WITH A FAST PACE OF MODERN LIFE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE TURNING TOWARDS FASTFOOD FOR THEIR MAIN MEALS. DO YOU THINK ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE ADVANTAGES?

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In today's world, people are so busy in their life that they don't like cooking
food
 at home.
This
 could happen due to their busy work schedule. I think the disadvantages of eating
food
 outside outweigh the advantages.
Although
, eating outside saves time but it's not healthy. It can later cause serious health issues. There are advantages
such
 as you save a lot of time, which in turn can be used for other activities.
For instance
, they can drop by any nearby restaurants or can order
food
 by delivery. Since the Fastfood consist of oil, preservatives ,sugar in a very large amount it can cause serious obesity in the long run.
However
, if you cook a home meal you can prepare the
food
 according to your taste and health. I think
Instead
 of eating
food
 outside one should cook
food
 at home.
Furthermore
, eating fast
food
 is
also
 bad for the environment. Since many restaurants use plastics for takeout's which in turn is exposed to the environment and create garbage.
In addition
 , People tend to order so much
food
 in restaurants which they are not able to eat and
then
 they throw it away which is bad for the environment as well. In conclusion, I think eating fast
food
 is not only bad for your health but
also
 for your surroundings. So in the end, I would say we should make our own
food
 and eat it rather than going outside and order.
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