Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion:

Nowadays, according to the development of the internet, virtual learning has become popular more and more;

thus

, some individuals reckon that

this

distance learning can be a suitable alternate for classical

education

.

However

, some others believe that traditional learning has no replacement. As an outstanding issue, there are some experiences in the

education

that any pupil have to face and

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environment will not be able to provide them;

nonetheless

, online learning can have some advantages. In the modern era, in

this

advanced world, most

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people tend to utilize online services

instead

of traditional ones but

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education

it is controversial. There

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tangible in

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process that students should face

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get the point.

Additionally

,

education

has several aspects

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academic learning;

for instance

, children will learn

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with others in schools or they can make a lot of friends among their classmates.

On the other hand

, there are some people who think there is no replacement for

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classical

education

.

Firstly

, I will

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with them but remember we had better not be narrow-minded;

in other words

, I reckon that e-learning can be a

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hand for upgrading our traditional

education

.

For example

,

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environment can help teachers monitor

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of their learners;

furthermore

, in some crucial circumstances

such

as the COVID-19

pandemic

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we can consider

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blended learning which includes virtual

education

besides

offline learning. Needless to say, the

education

that has been based on the internet will not be an appropriate

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for face-to-face learning on account of its limits. Eventually, distance learning

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cannot be accepted as a new

education

method

instead

of classical learning but can be considered as a helpful assistant that will contribute us to upgrade the previous version of

education

. Meanwhile, do not forget there are some experimental lessons that a teacher will not be able to teach them virtually.