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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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advanced technology,most people choose a variety of digital devices as their educational material.
However
, some people argue that
television
 comprises a large amount of percentage of adverse impact on education rather than a traditional book. Despite some disadvantage of
television
 has emerged, I will argue that
television
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 good option for learning. One primary reason is effective.
Television
 is filled with a great deal of graphics than traditional books. Undoubtedly, students can remember well through vivid video
instead
 of orthodox print-book;
Therefore
, they can build up more knowledge by watching
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 documentary and educational channel.
In addition
, readers
also
 can create an imagination base on 3-D animation, which leads to a
profund
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profound
 effect on society. One drawback,
however
, students are addicted to
television
 easily because of
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different kind of cartoons and movies.
This
 phenomenon may cause serious health
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such
 as poor eyesight and obesity.
In addition
 to
effectively
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 learning. Watching
television
 is beneficial to most people because they can understand the current trend or problem and have empathy simultaneously. Take the global climate as an example, audiences can realise the actual problem
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 rising
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sea level, which results in less
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 in agriculture, as well as may figure out the solution that how to protect the earth. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that effectively and more understand the current trend is the benefit from watching
television
.
Moreover
, we still need to be more cautious to schedule the time of watching.
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