Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects.

In general I don't think about
this
befor, becouse in our country in our
time
we do
this
everyday for parents. But today we have different
time
and we use other way: fastfood, semi-fabric food and other.
First
of all I not sure it is good or not, but i think all people want now how make nice food for they body at home: what product use, what
time
need for
this
and other. Secondary, what students should
study
this
lessons? If some people want be physics or math or some
also
why they need
study
science of food? Even more, they have enaugh question about other disciplin and
this
part want be prefer for them. Of course if some student
study
restoraunt busness or phisical trainig they need now how
this
work. Or if some students have lot off free
time
they can
study
this
topik. In conclusion, on my opinion: all people won a now what they wont a do in kitchen but not in
time
for other questions. Maybe it is good idea for school.
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