Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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infrastructure
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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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