Higher education could be funded in three ways. All costs paid by government, all costs paid by students or students paying all costs through a government loan. What are the advantages of these choices?

Nowadays, higher
education
is more important for all those who want to graduate. But some people are finding it difficult to manage funds to complete higher
education
.
This
essay will explain about three ways how funds are going to manipulate and will discuss the
advantages
of these three choices.
Firstly
, some
governments
are willing to pay all
costs
for
students
during their study period.
This
is an outstanding decision if
government
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can hold it for a long time, and there are many
advantages
will acquire;
for example
-, lower- and middle-class
students
are able to obtain free
education
, no extra tension about the fees, and country’s literacy level will increase gradually.
In contrast
, some
governments
have decided all
costs
should
paid
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by
students
throughout their study period. The main advantage is that government institutions are becoming richer despite the
education
improvement of the country whereas,
students
will have extra pressure about their tuition fees, and if
they
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unable to cover that, which will affect their whole career. The disadvantages are overwhelming
advantages
if
students
are going to pay all
costs
.
Furthermore
, some
governments
are offer loan fully and partially, which can be useful for most pupils.
Moreover
, major
advantages
are lower interest rate than private loans, does not
requires
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any credit history, and there will have more forgiveness options.
This
is a tremendous method to follow all the
governments
instead
of
urge
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to pay all
costs
to
students
.
Consequently
, from all these three ways the most common method is a sanction loan process, and it is a great idea because any student can
apply
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a loan without
a
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hesitation, and which will inspire
to
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them to
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reach their future
endeavors
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within
short
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the short
a short
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time period.
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