Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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essential during childhood.

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, these days many

children

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, rarely, stay with their

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as they have a busy work-life and early schooling.

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scenario may have some repercussions

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as behavioural changes and poor academic performance. On one hand, these days most of the

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have full-time jobs to maintain financial

stablity

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stability

and provide better facilities to the family.

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, the offsprings are

nutured

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nurtured

by either

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grandparents

or baby sitters so they are rarely

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attended

and cared

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their

parents

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.

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, since schooling starts at 2-3 years of

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the child

, eventually, opportunities to stay with

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cut off from

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, it has been seen

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families, especially, in developing countries.These two incidents contribute to

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a feeling of

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and other psychological trauma. On other hand, as the younger ones feel the neglect, causes other problems. The main one is that they

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find love and affection from outsiders often through online friends. The relationship will end up in

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and exploiting nature

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if the friend is a potential predator.

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, the students often show some kinds of behavioural changes

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as anxiety and panic

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attacks

and they tend to have poor grades in

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.

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, many

children

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browse

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as a method of distraction from their worries, but these vulnerable may be

expoited

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exploited

.

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situation could have been prevented

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if they had been closely monitored. In conclusion,

children

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often stay away from family either due to early schooling and

working

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status of

parents

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,

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may create some psychological and academic impacts on

children

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.