These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

People have a different opinion on whether caring

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the elderly at their own homes or nursing homes would be beneficial. I, personally, consider it would be better if they could be admitted

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care

homes since these institutions have specialized in providing aged

care

. On one hand, if

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aged member lives in a

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excellent support as they are cared

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nurses and

technitions

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technicians

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environment that solely designed for the oldies. Where they could, even, receive, medical assistance, psychology support and recreational therapies and meet other inmates. Apart from

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, since they had paid taxes when they worked, they deserve

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institutional

care

to have a peaceful

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retirement

life. On the other hand, the advocates of

home

argue that the aged generation could feel much better when they are surrounded by loved ones and familiar objects.

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can motivate them to live and behave in a more positive manner and they would much active.

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most families, adults work during the day time and they could not

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old people. Eventually, they seem to be more prone to depression than nursing

home

residents. On the other hand, the advocates of

home

argue that the aged generation could feel much better when they are surrounded by loved ones and familiar objects.

This

can motivate them to live and behave in a more positive manner and they would much active.

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,

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rarely because

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most families, adults work during the day time and they could not

care

the

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old people. Eventually, they seem to be more prone to depression than nursing

home

residents