Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that crime rates have dramatically increased over the
last
few years. Some criminals can manage themselves to become good human beings while their stay in prisons. One of the main reasons is that they have practically seen the problems and sacrifice they had to make.
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awareness about
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crimes in teenagers. I personally agree with the statement and the following essay will discuss
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ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a bad personality.
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in teenagers. After that, there should be workshop and seminars which should enhance the consequences of committing
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through the captives.
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, due to the experiences obtained as long as running punishment, they seem to become
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to tell the teens about the difficulties that might be faced when living in a prison.
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, most western countries
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these idea
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for their minor folks
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become
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good citizens through the ex-culprit experience.
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arrangements as well. They would feel better by sharing their stories and
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best way to stay away from
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offense
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for these
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society and would be glad for doing something good. In ,addition, alternative ways of educating
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person about the danger of accomplishing a misdeed are allowing teachers
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students would treat those as class lectures, not the
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intresting
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stories to listen to carefully. Educating students through stories and films can
also
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interactive as
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with
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culprit. To conclude, irrefutably we should hate misdeed, not the lawbreaker as they are
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they would learn
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from their experience.
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