Planting trees is very important .some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be build instead. what is youropinion?

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for building houses

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real estate agents should do

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amount of deforestation for building colonies and the government should ensure that the available barren

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is utilized for planting

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so living beings have fresh air to breathe in. Let us delve deeper to discuss more

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it in the upcoming paragraph. In the

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world, humans have

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materialistic and

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to maximize

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they destroy nature by cutting

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trees

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and building factories, housing colonies,

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havoc of deforestation done by humans will cost people in future when they will have to buy oxygen cylinders to get fresh air.

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, the real estate agents should ensure that they build housing boards

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with plenty of

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and almost all of the vacant

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is being utilized to grow plants.

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the countries like China, India, United States have

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population and there is

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of

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in the cities.

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, they have no choice

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to utilize the

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to

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of

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, they chop

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the

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to build flats so that more people can avail the benefits of staying in the city. In a nutshell, it is of no doubt people need a place to reside in a city to enjoy the benefits

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as of better schools, jobs, transportation,

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, it should be regulated that

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number of

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that are brought down, the same number or more saplings should be planted in the outskirts of the city or either alongside

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the roads so the air quality index s not

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effected

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