Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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The issue of human beings causing damage to mother nature is highly debated these days. In

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we will discuss how are negatively

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our day to day activities and what can be done by

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and individuals to tackle

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with, Use of fossil fuels chemical

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for daily activities

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as transportation, clothing is our greater concern to the future. These chemicals release toxic pollutants to the

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which damage our ozone layer and nature. A recent study by Harward University indicated that on

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average we produce enough

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carbon dioxide

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layer by 10km of

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each year which could potentially increase the earth temperature by

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intern causing global warming and

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leading to greater

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, the

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which we use is being dumped into the

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being properly

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is directly leading to

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in the animal kingdom.

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usually takes

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hundreds

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which we use generally ends up in

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or land if

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consumes

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material it could lead to its death,

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causing

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can invest heavily in green energy we could see

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change already happening in western countries.

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states of

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pledged to invest about $100 billion dollars in the coming 10 years and

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emission by 2020. As individuals even we can contribute to the greater good of

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society.

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, by reducing our

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dependency

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which can negatively impact

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to commute to

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places

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can greatly benefit the

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, using biodegradable

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and proper disposal of

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could

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be a

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. To conclude, modernization and globalisation

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caused greater good to society.

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, as we discussed there

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notion but there is always a

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incorporating

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which are ecofriendly and reducing our dependency on goods which could be harmful to the

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is the sweet pill that

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think we all can swallow.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Pollution: contamination, emissions, pollutants, industrial waste
Deforestation: habitat loss, biodiversity, urban development, logging
Climate Change: greenhouse gases, global warming, fossil fuels, renewable energy
Overfishing: unsustainable, fish stocks, marine ecosystems, conservation
Waste Production: non-biodegradable, plastics, recycling, waste management systems

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

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