Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

The issue of human beings causing damage to mother nature is highly debated these days. In
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we will discuss how are negatively
effecting
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the
atmosphere
wih
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with
our day to day activities and what can be done by
government
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the government
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and individuals to tackle
this
problem.
To begin
with, Use of fossil fuels chemical
products
for daily activities
such
as transportation, clothing is our greater concern to the future. These chemicals release toxic pollutants to the
atmosphere
which damage our ozone layer and nature. A recent study by Harward University indicated that on
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average we produce enough
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
which would deplete
ozone
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the ozone
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layer by 10km of
radius
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each year which could potentially increase the earth temperature by
2 degree
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intern causing global warming and
there by
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leading to greater
catastrophy
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.
Secondly
, the
plastic
which we use is being dumped into the
atmosphere
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without
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being properly
desintegrated
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disintegrated
this
is directly leading to
imbalance
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in the animal kingdom.
Plastic
usually takes
hundreads
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hundreds
of years to naturally degrade, so the
plastic
which we use generally ends up in
ocean
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or land if
animal
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an animal
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consumes
this
material it could lead to its death,
therefore
causing
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in
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ecosystem
ecosystems
ecosytem
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. To address
this
issue
goverments
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governments
government
can invest heavily in green energy we could see
this
change already happening in western countries.
For example
,
United
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states of
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pledged to invest about $100 billion dollars in the coming 10 years and
plans
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to go
net zero
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emission by 2020. As individuals even we can contribute to the greater good of
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society.
Firstly
, by reducing our
depency
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dependency
towards
products
which can negatively impact
environment
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the environment
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. Using
bicycle
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a bicycle
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to commute to
near by
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nearby
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places
instead
of
car
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a car
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can greatly benefit the
atmosphere
.
Secondly
, using biodegradable
products
instead
of
plastic
and proper disposal of
plastic
could
also
be a
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. To conclude, modernization and globalisation
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caused greater good to society.
However
, as we discussed there
also
drawbacks
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this
notion but there is always a
second
chance
incorparating
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incorporating
the
products
which are ecofriendly and reducing our dependency on goods which could be harmful to the
atmosphere
is the sweet pill that
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think we all can swallow.
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