The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

INFORMATION CONCERNING HOW THE EXPENDITURE OF A SCHOOL IN THE UK CHANGES ACROSS THE YEARS 1981, 1991 AND 2001 IS DEPICTED IN THE GIVEN PIE CHARTS.

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, WHAT IS NOTABLE IS THAT, IN EACH OF THE YEARS, THE CATEGORY WHICH RECEIVED MORE FUNDING THAN ANY OTHER WAS

TEACHER'S

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SALARIES

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THE SMALLEST AMOUNT OF MONEY WENT TOWARD INSURANCE. AS PER THE CHART, FROM 1981 TO 1991, TEACHERS'

SALARIES

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GREW BY 10% TO ACCOUNT FOR HALF OF ALL SPENDING.

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, NON-TEACHING

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FELL FROM 28% TO JUST OVER A FIFTH (22%) IN THE GIVEN PERIOD. 30% OF THE EXPENSES WAS DIVIDED EQUALLY BETWEEN RESOURCES AND FURNITURE AND EQUIPMENT, BUT THE FORMER'S SHARE INCREASED BY 5% IN 1991,

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THE LATTER'S DROPPED BY 1O) PER CENT. THE BUDGET ALLOCATED FOR INSURANCE INCREASED NEGLIGIBLY FROM 2 PERCENTAGE POINTS TO ONLY 3%. BETWEEN 1991 AND 2001, THE BUDGET RATE ALLOCATED FOR INSURANCE AND FURNITURE AND EQUIPMENT ROSE BY 5% AND 15%, RESPECTIVELY.

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IN THE CASE OF TEACHING AND NON-TEACHING STAFF

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AND RESOURCES WHERE

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FUNDING DECLINED AT A RANGE OF 5 AND 11 PERCENTAGE POINTS.