Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

CONTROVERSY EXISTS WHETHER THE YOUTH SHOULD CONFORM

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THE CONVENTIONAL NORMS OF SOCIETY OR

WHETEHER

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WHETHER

THEY SHOULD,

INSTEAD

, BE GIVEN THE LIBERTY TO ACT AND EXPRESS THEIR OWN INDIVIDUALITY. IN

THIS

ESSSAY

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ESSAY

, I WILL DISCUSS THE GIVEN VIEWPOINTS AND EXPLAIN MY

SUPPPORT

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SUPPORT

FOR THE LATTER.

TO BEGIN

WITH, CONFORMITY FOR OLDFANGLED

WAYS

OF LIVING IS ADVOCATED FOR SEVERAL REASONS.

FIRSTLY

, THEY OPINE THAT MOST YOUNGSTERS THESE DAYS ARE LACKING

OF

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VIRTUES

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THE VIRTUES

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OF LIFE.

FOR INSTANCE

, AS OPPOSE TO THE CHILDREN OF THE PAST WHO WERE APPARENTLY RESPECTFUL, COMPASSIONATE AND LAW ABIDERS, AN INCREASING NUMBER OF JUVENILE DELINQUENTS IS A TREND OF THE MODERN WORLD.

THIS

COULD HAVE NOT HAPPENED SHOULD THE TRADITIONAL

WAYS

WERE STRICTLY IMPOSED FOR THE RISING GENERATIONS TO FOLLOW.

ON THE OTHER HAND

, PROPONENTS OF EMPOWERING YOUNGSTERS TO BE THEIR OWN VERSION POINTS OUT THE FOLLOWING.

FIRSTLY

,

THIS

INIATIVE

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INITIATIVE

WOULD ENABLE ONE TO BECOME CONFIDENT OF THEMSELVES. WHEN A CHILD IS RESTRICTED TO CONVENTIONAL RULES AND REGULATION, HE FAILS TO SEE OTHER OPTIONS THAT COULD, IN ONE WAY OR ANOTHER,

DEVELOPE

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DEVELOP

HIS INDIVIDUALITY.

FOR EXAMPLE

, IN THE MIDDLE EAST, TRADITIONALLY, AS YOUNG LADIES ARE LIMITED TO DO HOUSEHOLD CHORES ALONE AND THAT MOST OF THEIR CHOICES ARE DECIDED BY THEIR MALE

GUARDIA

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GUARDIANS

GUARDIAN

, MOST WOMEN ARE AFRAID OF MAKING EVEN A SIMPLE DECISION EVEN WHEN GIVEN THE FULL REIGN TO DECIDE FOR HERSELF.

ADDITIONALLY

, YOUTHS WHO ARE UNRESTRAINED TO EXPRESS THEMSELVES MATURE TO BECOME PRO-THINKERS,

AS A RESULT

, INGENUITY COMES OUT NATURALLY FROM THEM. A GOOD EXAMPLE

FOR

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THESE ARE THE MODERN INVENTORS WHO BEND ALL SORTS OF TRADITIONAL

WAYS

AND THINKING BEFORE

SUCESSFULLY

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SUCCESSFULLY

DISCOVERING THE PRODUCTS OF

THEH

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THE

MODERN MINDS

SUCH

AS CELLPHONES, COMPUTERS, THE INTERNET AND THE LIST CONTINUES. IN MY OPINION, LIBERTY AT THE DISPOSAL OF THE RISING GENERATION PAVES THE WAY FOR A MORE AMBITIOUS AND FORWARD

THIKING

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THINKING

INDIVIDUALS AND SO

THEREFORE

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,THEREFORE

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,

THIS

MUST BE IMPLEMENTED IN THE GLOBAL SOCIETY. TO RECAPITULATE, WHILE SOME BELIEVE THAT

TRADIONAL

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TRADITIONAL

WAYS

SHOULD REMAIN AS THE PARAMETER FOR

YOUNSTER

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YOUNGSTER

YOUNGSTERS

TO FOLLOW IN THE

TODAYS

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SOCIETY, I BELIEVE THAT FREEDOM FOR INDIVIDUAL EXPRESSION SHOULD OBSERVE AT PRESENT.