Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss both views and give your opinion.

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carbon
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produced [emission],
government
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need[s] to take actions.
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government
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should make [create/pass]
a
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apply
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strict
regulations
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regulation
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to limit the [amount of
carbon
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produced]
carbon
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producer. If they produce
carbon
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more than the limit [threshold], they need [are required] to pay
certain
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amount of money to the
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some amount
of
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money . [
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] or the
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can
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close the business if they break [violate] the regulations
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several times.
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initiative will scare [deter] the businesses and remind [encourage] them to maintain [sustain] our environment For [In terms of]
water
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quality, I believe [it is] mostly caused by all the waste that [are] thrown [in]to the sea. Companies know that throwing
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stuff
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to
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into
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water
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is free, and they do not get any negative consequences because of that, so they will always do that. Again,
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government
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ought to develop more regulations regarding waste management.
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, companies should obey that all the waste that produced need to be recycled, no matter what. If not, regulators will shut down the business. Not only the initiative help[s] to increase
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quality, [but
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] the companies will be more sustain [sustainable] because they are using recycled products. To conclude,
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government
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should play a major part to decrease air and
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pollution. If not, I do not think we can properly
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and drink in the future.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • insights
  • progression
  • values
  • beliefs
  • heritage
  • identity
  • applicable
  • biased
  • subjective
  • practical
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