Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss both views and give your opinion.
carbon
produced [emission], government
need[s] to take actions. For instance
, government
should make [create/pass] Add an article
the government
a
strict Correct article usage
apply
regulations
to limit the [amount of Correct the article-noun agreement
regulation
carbon
produced] carbon
producer. If they produce carbon
more than the limit [threshold], they need [are required] to pay certain
amount of money to the Change the article
a certain
government
some amount of
money . [Change preposition
apply
Otherwise
] or the government
can also
close the business if they break [violate] the regulations in
several times. Change preposition
apply
This
initiative will scare [deter] the businesses and remind [encourage] them to maintain [sustain] our environment
For [In terms of] water
quality, I believe [it is] mostly caused by all the waste that [are] thrown [in]to the sea. Companies know that throwing stuffs
Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
to
Change preposition
into
water
is free, and they do not get any negative consequences because of that, so they will always do that. Again, government
ought to develop more regulations regarding waste management. Add an article
the government
For instance
, companies should obey that all the waste that produced need to be recycled, no matter what. If not, regulators will shut down the business. Not only the initiative help[s] to increase water
quality, [but also
] the companies will be more sustain [sustainable] because they are using recycled products.
To conclude, government
should play a major part to decrease air and Add an article
the government
water
pollution. If not, I do not think we can properly breath
and drink in the future.Replace the word
breathe
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite