Practice 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any ad

Dear Mr Anderson, I am a student of Statistic Training Course at your Academy. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am not able to take part in classes
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May 25th onwards. I expect that you will grant me to keep on hold the course with the
next
intake from October 2021. I work for an Audit Firm as an assistant audit, in that there are numerous recently assigned projects,
therefore
, my office involves me spend more time on
this
.
In addition
, there are a large number of workloads going on deadline in the near future, and in order to achieve them, I need to work extra hours per day.
Besides
, I travel to Adelaide for performing a plethora of official duties in early July . All these responsibilities impose
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put
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my lesson on hold for
this
period.
However
, I am ready to complete
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my program on grounds that it exerts various benefits on my career.
Hence
, I humbly to get support from you to accept my attendance in the
next
available batch.
This
will be assisted me both in
term
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of doing official work on the one hand and doing
course
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else
on the other hand
. I am appreciating your understanding and look forward to hearing from you soon Yours sincerely, Quynh Lam Nguyen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • balance responsibilities
  • increased workload
  • deferment
  • re-enroll
  • unexpected life events
  • full-time job
  • part-time evening course
  • health issues
  • personal commitments
  • course tutor
  • manage
  • express gratitude
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