Writing a letter to your friend and say why he would not enjoy going to college, explain why getting a job is a good idea for him and suggest types of job that would be suitable for him

Dear Joseph, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am so happy that you are about to change your future.
That is
so exciting. I know how hard it is to decide between going to college or getting a job. I passed through it many times and for
this
reason, I would give
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. In my opinion, you should get a job.
Firstly
, because you do not want to depend on your parents anymore.
Secondly
, when you start working, you will have the opportunity to know different people and learn new skills
such
as working in a team and communication, which I believe are quite important for you. And, to develop those abilities, I strongly recommend you looking for jobs in stores, as a salesman or in fast-food restaurants as an attendant. In my humble opinion, you wouldn’t like to go to college, because it requires discipline and commitment, and you are not prepared for it at
this
moment. Maybe, in the future, when you get more mature, going to college could be an incredible opportunity for you. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best, Débora Silva
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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