Nowadays young people mostly learn by reading books or watching movies and TV shows ,rather than personal experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, young people acquire knowledge majorly through viewing films, television programmes and they
also
read books instead
of learning by private experience
. This
essay totally agrees with this
notion because such
modes of learning are becoming more rampant and there are numerous things that could be learnt there rather than learning from their personal experience
.
The first
and foremost reason why these young generations learn by other means instead
learning through private Add the preposition
ofinstead
experience
is that there are more ways of acquiring knowledge, which has become a
commonplace. Correct article usage
apply
This
is because experiences
can be gained through stories in novela
, scripts acted in movies and on different TV shows. Correct your spelling
novels
For example
, survey
carried out Add an article
a survey
on
on a group of high school students revealed that 90% of these learners gained health knowledge through a particular cinema watched as they learnt that it is important to keep fit and prevent obesity through Change preposition
apply
story
of a woman in the film. Add an article
the story
As a result
,most of them determined to watch what thwy
consume and they determined to physically keep fit through Correct your spelling
they
healthy
diet.
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a healthy
Secondly
, different activities abound on various TV programmes and film,which could serve as a lesson for these young ones. They have different options of learning and there are loads of experiences
to learn from therefore
, they do not need to wait till they use their private experience
before they can learn as they shape their lives through numerous experiences
they have encountered. For instance
, interview conducted on some groups of learners show
that they look forward to achieving Change the verb form
shows
experiences
from others through reading stories and watching films . Consequently
, this
has prevented them from making terrible mistakes, which could result in learning through their personal experience
.
In conclusion, I completely agree that young people learn by watching movies, reading books and through shows on television rather than using what they experience
to achieve learning since other means are now commonplace and there are several lesson
to gain from Change to a plural noun
lessons
such
modes of learning.Submitted by baruwakeny on
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