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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views.

#people #boys #girls #schools #benefit
The topic about educating
boys
 and
girls
 in different
school
 is the thing that
people
 discuss the most,
beacause
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because
 half of the comments believed that putting
boys
 and
girls
 in the same
school
 can
brings
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 more benefits than
sperating
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separating
sporting
 them, but the other half protest that idea. The
easey
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essay
 below will show you the advantages and disadvantages in both views. For
people
 who follow the opinion that having the
boys
 and
girls
 study
sperately
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separately
 in two
difference
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. The advantages of
this
 idea are you can reduce the
amount
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 of pregnant teenagers, and
teenager
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 abortion, which
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effect
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 a lot in the health of the
girls
. Pregnant at
the
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 young age can lead to a lot of health problems. More than that, there are just
small
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 amount of
the
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teen
girls
can
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 come through that hard time and if the government know, the older person in the relationship can be in jail or re-education camp.
However
, the gender issues can be grown, because they have to meet
people
with
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 the same gender for
long
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 period of time.
On the other hand
,
countinueing
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continuing
 to allow
boys
 and
girls
studied
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 in the same
school
, is a thing that
people
 have done since we started having schools. Studied together can help students developed the communication skills better, can have
wide
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 range of friends. Despite the advantages of that,
its
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it
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 still contains a lot of things that can be out of control of the teachers which can
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effect
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 the students future and the reputation of the
school
. In conclusion, both
opinion
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have
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 its own benefits, we can not conclude which is better because
its
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 depending on the thought of each person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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