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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Anderson, I am a student of Statistics Training Course at your Academy. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am not able to attend the
classe
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classes
class
on
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 May 25th onwards. I expect that you will allow me to keep on the course with the
next
 intake from October 2021. I
work
 for an Audit Firm as an assistant audit. In that I have recently
assigned
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with
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numerous projects, my office requires me to spend more time at
work
.
In addition
, I am under pressure of a large number of deadlines in the coming time, and in order to meet them all, I need to
work
 extra hours every day.
Besides
, I am travelling to Adelaide for a plethora of official duties in early July. All these responsibilities force me to put my lessons on hold for
this
 period.
However
, I will be ready to complete my program on grounds that it brings me significant benefits in my career.
Hence
, I humbly suggest you accept my attendance in the
next
 available batch.
This
 will be beneficial to me in my office
work
 on the one hand and my course
on the other hand
. I highly appreciate your understanding and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Quynh Lam Nguyen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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