Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Due to
the rapid increase in technology and ,population
we are directly affecting nature.Add a comma
population,
This
essay will discuss the causes for
imbalance in flora and fauna and Change preposition
of
also
how governments and individuals can overcome such
issues. Firstly
, The earth is the only planet where people can survive.There are many factors that causing
damage to its natural habitat. Here, I will put forward 2 major environmental hazard activities Wrong verb form
cause
are
Air and water pollution.Unnecessary verb
apply
Although
, industrialisation is an indication of development and growth, the harmful fumes from factories,carbon monoxide from vehicles and crop burning hitting
the atmosphere badly.In Delhi, the pollution level Wrong verb form
hit
is
sky-rocketed Verb problem
has
such
public has to install an air purifier in their home and can't breathe freely. Besides
, the expelling of waste in open
Correct article usage
the open
resulting
in water pollution.Replace the word
results
Moreover
, the ocean became the sewage pond where every waste is disposed.
Change preposition
of.
Furthermore
, In Alaska, due to
poisonous water from crude oil ,ships
a Verb problem
apply
big
number of whales and aquatic animals are affected and giving their lives. Correct word choice
large
Thus
,Proper disposal of waste management has to be developed such
it won't impact other lives. Secondly
, There are governments
schemes employed from past centuries to overcome Change the noun form
government
such
damages
to the Fix the agreement mistake
damage
surrounding
.Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
Nevertheless
,Even more awareness and education have to be penetrated among people and has
to encourage Correct subject-verb agreement
have
to
plant trees and subsidise Correct pronoun usage
them to
on
eco-friendly products. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, Every being is equally responsible for the goodwill of the environment and make
mankind more liveable.Wrong verb form
making
For doing
so, each individual has to feel responsible and has to Change preposition
To do
maintain
their street or locality tidy.Verb problem
keep
Also
, make learn there
children about the importance of nature.Correct your spelling
their
However
, minimising the usage of vehicles, using eco-friendly items,recycling etc are some activities which people should adopt and take further
. In conclusion, the Survival of mankind is equally important as maintaining eco-balance.henceforth,ruling nations have to bring more reforms and cultivate more greener area
of forests to equalise Fix the agreement mistake
areas
the
global warmth.Correct article usage
apply
Whereas
, Every being is a soldier of their own planet and have
to save from calamities.Change the verb form
has
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