Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Due to
the rapid increase in technology and ,
population
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we are directly affecting nature.
This
essay will discuss the causes
for
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imbalance in flora and fauna and
also
how governments and individuals can overcome
such
issues.
Firstly
, The earth is the only planet where people can survive.There are many factors that
causing
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damage to its natural habitat. Here, I will put forward 2 major environmental hazard activities
are
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Air and water pollution.
Although
, industrialisation is an indication of development and growth, the harmful fumes from factories,carbon monoxide from vehicles and crop burning
hitting
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the atmosphere badly.In Delhi, the pollution level
is
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sky-rocketed
such
public has to install an air purifier in their home and can't breathe freely.
Besides
, the expelling of waste in
open
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resulting
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in water pollution.
Moreover
, the ocean became the sewage pond where every waste is disposed
.
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Furthermore
, In Alaska,
due to
poisonous water from crude oil ,
ships
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a
big
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number of whales and aquatic animals are affected and giving their lives.
Thus
,Proper disposal of waste management has to be developed
such
it won't impact other lives.
Secondly
, There are
governments
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government
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schemes employed from past centuries to overcome
such
damages
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damage
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to the
surrounding
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surroundings
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.
Nevertheless
,Even more awareness and education have to be penetrated among people and
has
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to encourage
to
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them to
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plant trees and subsidise
on
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eco-friendly products.
In addition
, Every being is equally responsible for the goodwill of the environment and
make
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mankind more liveable.
For doing
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so, each individual has to feel responsible and has to
maintain
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their street or locality tidy.
Also
, make learn
there
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their
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children about the importance of nature.
However
, minimising the usage of vehicles, using eco-friendly items,recycling etc are some activities which people should adopt and take
further
. In conclusion, the Survival of mankind is equally important as maintaining eco-balance.henceforth,ruling nations have to bring more reforms and cultivate more greener
area
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areas
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of forests to equalise
the
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global warmth.
Whereas
, Every being is a soldier of their own planet and
have
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to save from calamities.
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