Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

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Society

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is highly influenced by the

content

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shown on

media

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platforms,

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as violent

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which promotes hate and crime among peoples. I completely agree with the statement about promoting violent

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to our

society

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and will be discussing the same in the following paragraphs.

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with, there is a massive amount of audience who are interested in watching thriller and crime based shows, in which mass killing and brutal acts of humanity are promoted.

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, promoting

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kind of

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is spreading hate and crime in

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leading to an increase in criminal activities.

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, criminals can

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get ample ideas by observing various techniques of doing criminal activities shown on

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platforms.

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, one of the students fell from his roof while intimating the actor of superman.

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, heroic and brutality scenes are shown for the sake of accelerating TRP by the

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houses, which try to brainwash people to make them think

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true and real. Along with

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this

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will completely ruin the teenager as they tempted by showing the luxury lifestyle of film stars shown in films or news channels for which

media

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plays a vital role to promote

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kind of

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on their platforms. For ,example students were caught by the police stealing jewellery shop because their favourite stars

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them. To conclude, According to my, crimes are increasing in

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and the major reason behind it is violence telecasted by the

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. To stop

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government should acknowledge putting some strict laws to restrict the contents.

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