Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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arged
that the nations with a Correct your spelling
argued
proloned
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prolonged
time
will get more prosperous rather than a few Use synonyms
hours
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time
countries. I strongly disagree with Use synonyms
this
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time
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do
not measure the Change the verb form
does
nation
wealth compared to the many factors Replace the word
national
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and Use synonyms
people
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quality
of Use synonyms
life
I think these two factors are determined.
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types of machinery
pieces of machinery
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apply
people
because the machinery can Use synonyms
work
without taking break and speed. It can lead to Use synonyms
get
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such
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For instance
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machinery system in Wulanssi Use synonyms
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in Germany, both the employer and employees have gained mutual benefits. While the employee Correct your spelling
Organization
enjoy
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hours
per day and the Use synonyms
organaisation
can generate Correct your spelling
organisation
organization
higher
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a higher
quality
products on Use synonyms
a daily basics
.
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daily basic
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quality
of Use synonyms
life
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is most important rather than prolonged working Use synonyms
time
because the labour is the blood of every enterprise. Use synonyms
In other words
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low-level
people
in the organisation might get stress and depression due to Use synonyms
overlonged
practice Correct your spelling
overlong
as a result
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this
trend will affect the productivity of the industry. While the member of staff can not focus on their job Linking Words
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will affect the Linking Words
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therefore
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,therefore
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For example
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such
as Sweden and Finland value Linking Words
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work
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work-life
life
balance the workers of these countries Use synonyms
work
the fewest Use synonyms
hours
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amoung
all nations around the world, they have Correct your spelling
among
higher
gross domestic product. The family Add an article
a higher
the higher
time
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life
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people
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work
provide them with sufficient Use synonyms
time
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therefore
, they experience less Linking Words
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strain.
To conclude, the saying that longer working Use synonyms
hours
can lead to higher revenue is a misconception. I believe that with the development of Use synonyms
technology
and Use synonyms
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life
balance can be assured of more economic Use synonyms
successful
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success
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