Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your luggage on the plane. Write the letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: 1. Where and when you lost your bag. 2. What your bag look like 3. What its contents were

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I am writing to inquire about my luggage misplacement. When I was travelling from London to Vancouver I left my hand luggage on the

airplane

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aeroplane

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. I got to know about it when I reached home. I do not have fresh memory about when I

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lose

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loose

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lose

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it but I have a little bit of a flashback that when

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the airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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was about to land I went for

washroom

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the washroom

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and I think that time I lost it because it was on my lap. So, it should be under the seats. It was neon in colour and had

a black strips

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a black strip

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on it. It has my cards In it.

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, Inside the

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bag

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there is

tag

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a tag

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which has all my personal information. I placed it inside the

bag

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so that if in case I

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lose

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loose

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lose

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it. In

this

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way

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it would not be a difficult task to find my

bag

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Furthermore

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, I want to mention that it has a small

bag

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inside it as well which has some change in it. It

also

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have

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has

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keychain

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a keychain

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on it.

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, If you may not find the

bag

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them I would really

appreiciate

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appreciate

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it if

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the airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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would help my getting my claim from

insurance

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an insurance

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company by providing me

needed

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documents. I travel often so I have my travel insurance with me. I will be eagerly waiting for your revert. Yours faithfully, Priya

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

224 words

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The Greeting

In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the Internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to become successful career. While others believe that it is better to get a job staight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some says that music, art and drama are important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more polluted? What effects does this have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.