In many countries the level of crime is increasing in crimes and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think is and what can be done about it?

Nowadays, In some

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crime

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rates are dramatically increasing and it

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become

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violent day by day.

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essay will discuss its reason and

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suggest

solution

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to overcome

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with, There are basically two main reasons for

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crime

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rate.

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, lack of

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to the juvenile

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lead

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to

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unemployment. When a person

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get

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an

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employment he finds

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different ways to earn money.

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he

start

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crimes

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as robbery.

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, a survey was conducted in North America in which found that 80% of

criminals

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are non-educated and unemployed. To

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their basic needs they commit

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crime

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a crime

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.

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,

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is no

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strict

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to punish

criminals

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. When they get

catch

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by

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a cop

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and

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they easily get bail.

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, there are some solutions to tackle the problem. The government should provide free

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in the backward areas. When an individual get degree can easily get a job. He can earn his bread. Authorities should

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provide basic needs in slum areas.

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, In Russia, bureaucracy

provide

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shelter, food and clothes to the people of slum areas.

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,

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crime

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rate is less as compared to other countries.

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, there should make strict

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to punish

criminals

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so that they cannot commit

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crime

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a crime

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in

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life. To conclude, In my opinion, lack of

education

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, unemployment and proper

law

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are the main causes for

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violent crimes.

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can be handle by

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the government

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by making

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law

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a law

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to punish

criminals

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, provide free

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and employment to the people.