The graphs below show the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema visits by different age groups from 1996 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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number
of people
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the movie
as well as
how many time
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times
which
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at
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cinema
according to
various age
groups
in Australia over a period of 4 years
.
It can be seen that the number
of visitors came
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who came
cinema
, which
stood at 62 per cent in 1996, compared to 72 per cent over the Correct pronoun usage
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next
2 years
. One year
later, there was a slight decrease of 2 percent
before increasing to 72 per cent in 2000 in the percentage of attendees who saw a Change the spelling
per cent
movie
in the theatres. In addition
, the average of
frequency stood at 10.3 Change preposition
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visits
annually in 1996. And then
, it reached at
11.1 Change preposition
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times
in 1997 before dropping about 8.3 times
over the next
3 months.
In 1996, the number
of people
between 14 -35 years
old who went to the cinema
about
15 Add a missing verb
was about
times
while
roughly 13 times
of visitors aged 35-49. Moreover
, over the
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years
old reach the lowest point at 10 times
. After one year
, All of the age
groups
had the same pattern , there was a significant rise of 8 times
in
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groups
who came to the cinema
. And then
, the figures for the year
1998 fall dramaticallyChange preposition
by
times
in people
who
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to
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, the
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groups
who
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the
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years
old sharply fall to 13 visits
and over 10 times
, respectively. In the year
1999, the average of visits
also
steeply increase in all of the groups
( over 20 times
in youngest
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the youngest
age
group
, 20 times
in 35-49 years
old and 17 times
in 50 or more ). At the end
of the year
, the cinema
visits
of each group
rose gradually. However
, people
in the over 50
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over-50
age
group
still were the lowest frequency to see the cinema
with under 15 times
, whereas
the most regular visits
were the youngest groups
with 18 times
, approximately.
In conclusion, the
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a
number
of citizens tends to upward trend
to see a Correct your spelling
tend
movie
annually. According to
the charts, we can see that the most
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age
group
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theatre that was youngsters.Submitted by caomyphuong3004 on
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