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Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#meat #health
Nowadays, the
tast
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 of the people has been changed and some of them believe that
meat
 foods can bring many mental diseases for us.
Although
 vegetables are rich in nutrients, personally I believe that we must eat a variety of foods. The connection between human and nature ,more specifically with
animals
, going to be stronger more and more. It is said that humans must respect
to
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nature and avoid hunting other species of
animals
, which lead humans to vegetable-based meals.
Moreover
, excessive use of animal
meat
 may bring some mental issue. There are many illnesses which are in
animals
meat
 and humans body cannot adapt itself to them. As result, many of us make our body weak by eating them and we must replace them with green dishes.
In contrast
, there is a wide range of benefit which comes from eating
meat
 and they are valuable for our body. Most of the nutritional vitamins and proteins are inside cow and chicken
meat
 which are necessary for us and we cannot receive them from other types of foods.
For example
 protein of
chest
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 of the chicken is rich in protein and we can
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fine
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 it harder in others.
In addition
, eating
meat
 can improve our immunity system against many health problems. many
the
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people become sick because of
the
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physical weakness. One of the most important things which can help us to develop it is eating high-value meals. there is a fact that vegetables are not enough for having a strong immune system and vegetarian must eat some supplements that bring for them some important protein. But we can find many valuable things in
meat
 which bring for us wide range of benefit. In conclusion, some of the people said that we must eat whatever
grow
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 from the ground and avoid hunting
animals
 for our cooking, but in my
opinion
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 we must eat a wide range of materials in a suitable area and keep our frame healthy.
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