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In some culture children were told that hard eork helps them to achieving whaterver they want. Write advantages and disadvantagesof this

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Securing a good position is the aim of most
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people. In certain communities, the youngsters are told that if they
work
 hard, they could gain anything.
However
,
this
 statement has
benifits
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benefits
 and drawbacks. There are considerable numbers of positives
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can be seen if a person works hard.
First
 of all, the children would tend to dedicate themselves to achieve whatever position they want to possess since they have mentally prepared to try
deepily
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deeply
.
Similarly
,
this
 notion motivates them to encounter any kinds of hurdles and troubles which may come across and stay focus
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 until they win their interest.
For example
, when any scholar
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wants to become either scientist or
politician
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a politician
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, they must go through a sequence of challenges and many
occusions
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occasions
 may hinder them to set back. The idea of hard
work
 would be the only thing
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 motivate them. On the other side, these children can be easily exploited by different predators as they would ready to
work
 hard to attain an optimal position in their life. Most of them are highly vulnerable and easy to
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. Eventually, these people can end up
in
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working some dangerous jobs
such
 as mining, factory and
mannual
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manual
 labour.
As a result
, they may risk their life only because
of
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they were told that
the
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hard
work
 may assist them to get anything they want.
Nevertheless
, in
modern
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 world, it is essential to know about smart
work
 rather than
hard
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a hard
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 one. In conclusion, even though teaching
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 of hard
work
 is good to an extent, it can have some repercussions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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