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In many countries, people throw away a lot of food from restaurants and shops. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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it is true that
people
 expel eatable items from
restaurant
 and
food
 shops.
This
 essay discusses what makes
public
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 do so along with some possible solutions that may be implemented to alleviate the problem. it is often a trend in recent years that many public frequently visit the
restaurant
 to eat.As
food
 items will be prepared according to the average number of persons who visit the
restaurant
 on day to day basis.in
this
 way sometimes
food
 will be excess and few times it will be less.As cooked
food
 cannot be used on
next
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 day management will throw away the excess
food
 in order to maintain hygiene and provide quality
food
 to the customers.
This
 is the primary and foremost reason for
food
 being wasted.in the economic
times
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 journal it is published that 33% of excess
food
 was being wasted by the management. The possible solution to
this
 problem is collecting the excess
food
 from restaurants and shop and giving it to charity homes or to the
people
 who are in desperate hunger.The government should encourage the management to inform the charity homes or respective
people
 when there is excess foodstuff .so in
this
 way excess foodstuff can be used wisely and save poor
people
 who are in search of
food
. In conclusion,as
people
 throw a lot of leftover foodstuff from
restaurant
 and shop.Steps must be taken by the Government to provide the excess meals to the needy ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overproduction
  • inefficient
  • supply chains
  • perception
  • disposable
  • replaceable
  • awareness
  • education
  • regulations
  • redistribution
  • donation
  • portion control
  • inventory management
  • public awareness campaigns
  • attitudes
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