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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#rubbish #governments #amount
Nowadays, the amount of waste has multiplied widely.
This
 problem happens due to lack of basic education on population, being,
thus
,
responsability
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responsibility
 of the government to act in
favor
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 of the environment. In
this
 essay, I will outline why
this
 phenomenon is taking place and what the government can do to reduce it.
To begin
 with, undoubtedly, the population around the globe has increased since the end of the 20th century;
consequently
, the trash produced has increased proportionally as well. The simple
action
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 of throwing a chewing
gun
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gum
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 on the street, or opening the car window to launch a paper aside mirrors
the
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society
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 conscience.
Moreover
,
this
 nonsense regards
to
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rubbish production since infancy is portrayed on the nation
atitude
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attitude
 towards ecological issues. To illustrate
this
, one case in point would be the Carbon Credits that every country pursue to produce a secure
amout
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amount
 of pollutant gases
at
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 the atmosphere; some countries,
such
 as the USA and China, buy those credits from
others
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 lands to maintain their rights in trash production.
Furthermore
,
besides
 those negative examples aforementioned, the union can and must be preoccupied about
this
 emergent setback, implementing measures
which
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 should be taken to mitigate pollution outcomes. The main action must be concentrated on education, as today's
juvelines
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guidelines
 are the future's adults, so believing on schooling improvement should be bear in mind.
Additionally
, using the media as
a
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 information aid to encourage the 3 R's (reuse, reduce and recycle) mentality would be essential
on
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 disseminating knowledge and assisting on waste destination. To summarize, lack of knowledge regarding trash and their impacts on the world
are
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 a huge concern, currently, and there are, still,
inumerous
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numerous
 steps to be taken until we get to a
satisfatory
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satisfactory
 point when it comes to the federation actions.
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