Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime.

This

is a true fact.

However

, a fair amount of people think that wealthy nations often give

cash

to underdeveloped territory whereas it does not cure

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poverty while others think that the rich states should give other kinds assist to the poor states rather than capital. I strongly agree with the

second

point and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, the

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affluent

countries frequently give more

cash

help to

third

level countries even though these kinds of territory never solve their privation. The wealthy empire should give others types of support

such

as starting a business in order to

this

type of empire will get more job opportunity

as a result

, the people economic status might be increased

therefore

automatically the

state

economy will improve.

For example

, the USA has invested a huge amount of

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money

to

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India

therefore

,

this

empire folks can get more job opportunity from the USA.

Moreover

, another reason is if a wealthy kingdom

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cash

to

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level

state

meanwhile

this

benefit can get

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area of people whereas the

affulant

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affluent

effluent

nations will provide others support to these kinds of territory in order to would get benefit all folks. To be more precise the rich countries will provide a technical courses training to the

underdevloped

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underdeveloped

state

community

therefore

, they are able to find their occupation

as a result

, their financial status might be developed. To conclude, the lavish

state

always

support

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to

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the underdeveloped kingdom whether

cash

or other things. Even though still now the poor nations can not improve. I hope the poor

state

might be developed when the rich kingdom will provide other types of help

such

as material, job opportunity, technical training courses

instead

of money.