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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming of communication more powerful way than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
audio
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audiovisuals
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visuals
 and pictures are mostly used for communication. People prefer communicating via videos
instead
 of
text
. Communicating via pictures and movies are considered to be more effective in modern time and I totally agree with it.
Firstly
,
message
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the message
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 transmitted via graphics
are
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is
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 more effective and efficient.
For example
, research has shown that teaching and learning done via pictures and movies are more effective. Students learn and memorise faster
,
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apply
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 when graphics are used
instead
 of
text
.
In addition
 photographs and movies are
also
 used to teach students with disability. Differently able students
finds
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 it
more easy
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 to understand when they are taught using audio,
visuals
,
instead
 of
text
 only.
Secondly
, communicating via photo is used in business and it is considered to be and it is very much effective.
For
example
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 recent advertisements use these techniques
instead
 of just
text
.
Similarly
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 organisations
uses
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audio
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audiovisuals
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visuals
 to train their employees because it is more effective and it helps their
empoyees
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employees
 to understand better.
Further
, the use of logo, brand image are few examples that
shows
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 graphics are powerful than just
text
. In conclusion, we can say audio and
visuals
 are that used for effective
teaching learning
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teaching-learning
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 method. They are
also
 used in organisations for training their employees.
In
addition
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 business houses use these techniques for advertising their product and services as they are more impactful than just
text
.
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