Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is always a conflicting view whether persons should go with
bad
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the bad
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situation or make efforts to overcome them.
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essay will discuss both sides of the argument and express my view.
People
who accept bad situation will not have
courage
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to fight
with
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it.some humans will have low confidence that if they quit their
job
,they will not find other better
job
than the present
job
.They might think that they
dont
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don't
have enough skills to cope up with the
curent
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current
market jobs.They are worried that if they come out of their present
job
,they will go with
unemployement
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unemployment
for years and struggle to pay their bills until they find another better
job
.
This
type of
people
always
comprimise
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compromise
with their conscience and go with their present fate.
on the other hand
,some
people
will fight with bad situations happening
infront
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in front
of them.
These kind
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of
people
always have great courage and
confident
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confidence
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that will have better future if they put proper efforts in it.These persons
argure
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argue
that world
is
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are
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very big and better jobs are available in
th
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the
market.
However
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it requires some kind of extra skills which they will acquire from training for a while.These
people
believe that if we do proper planning and
hardwork
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hard work
,money is not at all a matter.
For example
,Bill gates was once a normal person ,but now he is one of the richest
man
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men
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in the world which he could not achieve if he
accept
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accepts
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his present fate. In conclusion,Though some
people
will have reasonable excuses for accepting
the
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apply
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negative situations,it is very beneficial to try and improve their circumstances.In my opinion,
i
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strongly believe that we should always try to get out of the bad situations
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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