An increasing number of people are buying what they need online • What are the advantages and disadvantages of both Indivisual and companies for shopping online

Nowadays, online shopping is getting popular among
people
and it is impacted to buying culture of the world with
benifits
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and drawbacks.
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essay will discuss how to relating to the customers and producers. On the one hand, online shopping is providing help to individuals to save
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time and money rather than physical shopping in supermarkets or other shops.
such
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latest
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technology like
internet
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the internet

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, wifi,
people
can order the
goods
or services at any time and
any where
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unless wasting time to go supermarkets.
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goods
production companies are having more support from e-commerce
in
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these days and it is helping to increase their turnover as well.
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, latest surveys are showing online sales in supermarket chain has been increased dramatically in recent years.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of online shopping showing up as well.
People
are ordering more items than usual and selecting unnecessary
goods
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online that
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forward
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to increasing living cost of families.
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,
people
could
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about comparing
of
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good's prices and quality at different suppliers.
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creating new problems for production companies with heavy returns of
goods
and companies need to provide better solutions for that.
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as
fast
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delivery system,
convient
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return policies and hotline for customers. In conclusion, with some drawbacks of growing online shopping is the most popular option of
consumer
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the consumer

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sector in present days and it will
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more advance in near future.
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