Due to growth of population many people live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas. Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?
Raising of
population
is becoming a reason Add an article
the population
of
more infrastructures. Lots of individuals are living in Change preposition
for
average
size of flats where they Add an article
the average
also
don't have outside space
. This
trend has more pros than consider
which I will substantiate in my upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples.
Living in Change the verb form
considering
apartments
has become common in people. Firstly
, folks like students and employees who work or study in huge cities, they found limited space
of flat is affordable for them. They can take this
type of accommodation Change preposition
at on
on
Correct your spelling
an
easy
cost which can Add an article
the easy
be save
their money. Change the verb form
save
For example
, number
of students who are already paying Change the article
a number
the number
vast
amount of money for their higher education, Add an article
a vast
therefore
, they think if they live in tiny apartments
it will be easy to manage their lodging expenses.Secondly
, tiny
flat can be easily maintained and Correct article usage
a tiny
also
organized in a good way. Even though,
limited Remove the comma
apply
space
of flats don't require so much stuff in it,
and merely keep your necessary things. Despite Remove the comma
apply
of
merits Remove the preposition
apply
this
trend also
has a number of drawbacks.
People who have big families if they
think about Correct pronoun usage
apply
to buy
Change the verb form
buying
average
size of apartment Add an article
the average
then
it can be extremely hard for them to manage in limited space
. However
, like joint
family where all family members will live together, it looks messy and nonadjustable, in light of the fact that they need large Add an article
a joint
space
for
Change preposition
to
live
. Replace the word
life
Additionally
, family
who have young children they Add an article
the family
a family
also
need courtyard or outside area, where their children can play in free time. Hence
, tiny apartments
not come
with extra outside Change the verb form
are not come
were not come
did not come
space
where people can go and sit to take refresh air.
To summarize, I believe that, small apartments
are good for nuclear family and those who live individually. However
, this
limited space
of flats are
not perfect for vast families, and those who Change the verb form
is
doesn't
have Change the verb form
don't
habitat
to live in Correct article usage
a habitat
tidy
or narrow Correct article usage
a tidy
space
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...