Due to growth of population many people live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas. Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?

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population
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is becoming a reason
of
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more infrastructures. Lots of individuals are living in
average
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size of flats where they
also
don't have outside
space
.
This
trend has more pros than
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which I will substantiate in my upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples. Living in
apartments
has become common in people.
Firstly
, folks like students and employees who work or study in huge cities, they found limited
space
of flat is affordable for them. They can take
this
type of accommodation
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on
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an
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easy
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cost which can
be save
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their money.
For example
,
number
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a number
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of students who are already paying
vast
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amount of money for their higher education,
therefore
, they think if they live in tiny
apartments
it will be easy to manage their lodging expenses.
Secondly
,
tiny
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flat can be easily maintained and
also
organized in a good way. Even though
,
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limited
space
of flats don't require so much stuff in it
,
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and merely keep your necessary things. Despite
of
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merits
this
trend
also
has a number of drawbacks. People who have big families if
they
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think about
to buy
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average
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the average
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size of apartment
then
it can be extremely hard for them to manage in limited
space
.
However
, like
joint
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family where all family members will live together, it looks messy and nonadjustable, in light of the fact that they need large
space
for
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live
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.
Additionally
,
family
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the family
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who have young children they
also
need courtyard or outside area, where their children can play in free time.
Hence
, tiny
apartments
not come
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were not come
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with extra outside
space
where people can go and sit to take refresh air. To summarize, I believe that, small
apartments
are good for nuclear family and those who live individually.
However
,
this
limited
space
of flats
are
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is
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not perfect for vast families, and those who
doesn't
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don't
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have
habitat
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a habitat
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to live in
tidy
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a tidy
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or narrow
space
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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