Some people think that when many imported tv programs or films are shown in country. it can improve the country’s culture.others feeling is better for a country to make and broadcast its own local movie.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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series or movies made locally enhance the understanding of their own local culture. In

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remains locally. All in all, it can be concluded that there should not be any restriction for broadcasting it . But

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