Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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their
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to private
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need not pay
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to support
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education
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system
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. In
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will increase
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overall
education
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believe
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is not a good idea.
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believe parents who send their
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to private
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schools
are financially capable enough to support the
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of their kids and simultaneously pay
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to
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edcuation
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education
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. At the same time if those families are discouraged for not paying
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it will increase pressure on public funds and
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ultimately
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education
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, it
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economic
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imbalance and put pressure on the knowledge
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. Private schools will be full of
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who comes from
wealthy
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background and looks for quality
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whereas on
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public
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will have students coming from underprivilege
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who solely depends on public
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and government funds for their
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it will put pressure on teaching staff on where to join, as private
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will ready to pay
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higher
salary which will attract good quality teachers leaving little or no room for public
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for best teacher. To conclude,
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beleive
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parents who
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children
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should
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be encouraged to pay
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for
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growth of
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education
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the education
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system
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as knowledge is
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the foundation
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for any country to prosper and
growth
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Education
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is an important and fundamental pillar for any nation to go on
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the path
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of economic development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Inequality
  • Socio-economic groups
  • Public good
  • Well-educated population
  • Double payment argument
  • Tax base
  • Infrastructure
  • Qualified teachers
  • Choice and privilege
  • Tax credits
  • Deductions
  • Exempting
  • Public education
  • Funding
  • Resources
  • Collective responsibility
  • Educational quality
  • Directly benefit
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