Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

I believe one should always keep their house and office premises clean as
this
not only help them to increase their productivity but at the same
time
helps them to remain calm and focus. In
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I will highlight some of the positive
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to
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your
home
and
work space
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neat and clean.
To begin
with, keeping all your stuff in systematic order and at the
desingated
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designated
place helps
oneself
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to focus on other challenging aspects of work rather than wasting
time
to find basic things like pen or paper.
Also
if things are kept at their pre-defined place one can guide
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other person
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to find out through instructions in his or her absence which helps to save
time
. Being organised help to increase productivity and create
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enviornment
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environment
around, as it will bring down chaos and more discipline in
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attitude.
On the other
hand
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it becomes very important
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current
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pandemic scenario where maximum employees are working from
home
, it put
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additional pressure on everyone to keep their desk clean as there is no distinction left between personal and
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. It
also
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physcological
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psychological
physiological
effect, as clutter space often brings confusion and consume more
time
on unproductive task.
Clean
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home
is
also
beneficial to kids as they cannot move out for play and solely dependent on
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enviornment
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environment
for their development. If office
stuffs
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are kept openly around
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there is
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possibility
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that juvenile may play with them and result in damaging it. Overall I am of opinion that if one has learned to keep everything in
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manner it will not only assist them in leading a peaceful life but
also
help them to become more
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disciplined
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and mature person as he may not have to worry of searching little stuff in the moment of
hurry
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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