When choosing the job, the salary is the most important consideration to what extent do you agree or disagree

There are many purposes for travelling. Most of them are to relax and motivate. Studies said that travelling can cure some mental illnesses and physical disorders. Many
people
usually
travel
with
friends
and family, but others love to
travel
alone. There are several reasons for both types of
people
. For me, I don’t like to
travel
alone and I prefer to
travel
with a pack of
people
. I will explain the main two reasons why I prefer
this
below.
First
of all, we can have more fun and adventures.
People
usually do adventurous things when they are with
friends
as it can give them pleasure.
However
,
this
is not always good and sometimes
people
can hurt. Travelling with
friends
, we can make memories, solve problems easily and share foods. Based on my personal experience, my two
friends
and I went to Bagan two years ago and we got a problem; our car battery died. We were really exhausted and had to ask for help. Unfortunately, there were no cars passing the highway or no
people
nearby.
However
,
one
of my
friends
saved the day. He carried the auxiliary battery which is the emergency use to recharge the car battery.
That is
one
of the benefits of travelling with
friends
.
Secondly
, travelling with
friends
can give us so many experiences. When a
person
meets different manners and morals of
people
, he knows more about
people
than a
person
who does not have those experiences. Travelling with
friends
is
one
of the best ways to improve friendship. We can get close together with our
friends
. There is
one
saying, ‘We cannot know a
person
's morals at
one
glance but after living a day with him you can exactly know his morals’.
For example
, when I was a grade 8 student, my classmate and I went on a school vacation to Hlaw Gar park for 2 days. I will never forget about him and he was really awful because he put all of his dirty clothes on my bed, he took a shower for no more than 2 minutes but he did not use soap and he ate like a pig. After that vacation, I think I know a lot about him. As a good friend, I tried to convince him how to be a good-mannered
person
and what needs to change. In the end, he became a well-mannered and self-disciplined
person
.
Finally
, travelling is good but travelling with
friends
is better. We can gain experiences and memories. We
also
can teach ourselves what is right and what is wrong.
Furthermore
, we can release our stress and depression and when we get back to our places from the
travel
, we can feel as fresh as a new
person
.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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  • motivating factor
  • dissatisfaction
  • demotivation
  • job satisfaction
  • overall well-being
  • fulfillment
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  • flexible working hours
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  • skill development
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