Some people opine that cinema will eventually lose its appeal to mass people and very few people will go to cinema halls. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
In
the
recent Correct article usage
apply
time
, number
of individuals going to movie halls has been decline and might lose their customers in future. Due to globalization, Change the article
a number
the number
people
has
Change the verb form
have
vast
majority of activities on weekend and has Add an article
the vast
a vast
internet
to watch movies Correct article usage
the internet
at
Change preposition
in
comfort
of home.
To commence with, Add an article
the comfort
population
has Add an article
the population
wide
range of leisure activities rather than going to movie Add an article
a wide
theaters
because globalization has brought everything in the small village. Change the spelling
theatres
As a result
, folks has
multiple options and Change the verb form
have
differents
things to exploreCorrect your spelling
different
on
Change preposition
at
end
of the week. Add an article
the end
Additionally
, cities has
Change the verb form
have
ample
number of restaurants and those Change the article
an ample
the ample
has
Change the verb form
have
foriengn
cuisine. Correct your spelling
foreign
Therefore
, people
love to go out for dinner on weekend and spend quality of
Change preposition
apply
time
with their friends and family. For instance
, on
Change preposition
at
end
of the week, my friends and I go to Mexican restaurants for dinner and walk around Add an article
the end
city
. Add an article
the city
Therefore
, Interest
of Correct article usage
the Interest
people
has shifted toward different things from going to cinema halls.
Secondly
, Internet has made life easier and convenient and provides us with series of applications to watch film
, play video games in our comfort zone. Add an article
the film
a film
Moreover
, individuals to their leisure time
home
with their families by watching movies on Netflix Change preposition
at home
instead
of going out. Also
, video games are taking over different things on do
spare Change the verb form
doing
time
because,
many Remove the comma
apply
people
on youtube has
streaming channels on Change the verb form
have
game
. Add an article
the game
For instance
, my brother love
to play on his ps 5 than going out Change the verb form
loves
for
movies.
In the conclusion, I agree with Change preposition
to
point
that Add an article
the point
people
has
shifted their interest from going cinema halls and watch Change the verb form
have
movie
at home and do different stuff on weekends to enjoy with their loved ones.Add an article
a movie
the movie
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